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Zero Tolerance towards Violence Abusers                         Gigi Wu(Sha Tin)

�@�@Domestic violence brings tremendous harm to children and the family.SO,I

see no point in granting sympaty to the violence abusers.I think heavier

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2010-8-31 22:20 daniel06
You shouuld use the style of Buisness letter, because it is formal. :)

2010-8-31 22:28 wilson29

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Yes it is. :)

btw, you should put semicolon after than greeting. :)

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Yes it is. :)

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