標題: [其他] 求修改英文film report,超急!!!聽日要用黎做oral!!! [打印本頁]
作者:
o口o” 時間: 2008-2-18 23:28 標題: 求修改英文film report,超急!!!聽日要用黎做oral!!!
求修改英文film report,超急!!!
聽日要用黎做oral,只需睇有無 文法錯/用錯字/串錯字,
內容盡量唔好改,仲有如果自問英文能力唔係咁好,都唔好改,thx ^ ^
文章:
Good afternoon everyone. Today, I would like to share with you about my feeling of the film 'L change the would'. This is a film that I have watched at last week.
'L change the world' is the film which talk about a ganius detective, L, and what he did in his last 23 days. This was a virus crisis at that time. The name of the virus called "Death" and it made by K, another genius.
At the end of the film, L was dead, but he saved and changed the world. He said that only one couldn't change the world. This ending is quite touching for me.
If I were the director and I have a chance to change the ending of the film, I would not let L dead. It is because L is a good person, and I will not let a good person dead, so I choose to change his world. also, if L had not died, I could watch more story about him.
Finally, I hope you feel more interested about this film and I would like to say with you 'Only one can't change the world.'
This is the end of my share,thank you for your attention.
大概想說(中文):
大家好。今天, 我希望與您分享關於我的電影 'L change the would', 在上星期我觀看了。
'L change the would' 是談論天才探員, L 的影片, 並且什麼他做了在他的最後23 天。這次的敵人是病毒危機。病毒的名字叫"Death" 並且它由K, 另一個天才製造。
在最後, L 是死了, 但他拯救了和改造了世界, 並且他說「only one can't change the world.」。這個結尾對我來說是相當感人的。
如果我是編輯並且我有一次機會改變影片的結尾, 我不會讓L 死。它是因為L 是一個好人, 並且我不會讓一個好人死去, 因此我選擇並且改造他的世界.而且, 如果L 未死, 我就能夠觀看更多關於他的故事。
最後, 我希望您會對這影片更感興趣和 我希望與您only one can't change the world'
這是我的分享的結尾, 謝謝您的注意。
[ 本帖最後由 o口o” 於 2008-2-19 00:08 編輯 ]
作者:
小奈由季 時間: 2008-2-18 23:31
'L change the would orz
作者:
homika﹏小貓 時間: 2008-2-18 23:36
I would like to share with you about my feeling of the film 'L change the would'
i would like to share the film "L change the would"
咁就可以了
作者:
wat.the.fun? 時間: 2008-2-18 23:51
我寫珍珠港...
作者:
匿名
時間: 2008-2-19 18:14
急就咪鬼十一點半先擺出黎
作者:
小軒 時間: 2008-2-19 18:17
今日你Ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔ果時Ｌ ｃｈａｎｇｅ ｔｈｅ ｗｏｒｌｄ 聽到嫌－ －
作者:
unobi 時間: 2008-2-19 18:24
原帖由 o口o” 於 2008-2-18 23:28 發表
求修改英文film report,超急!!!
聽日要用黎做oral,只需睇有無 文法錯/用錯字/串錯字,
內容盡量唔好改,仲有如果自問英文能力唔係咁好,都唔好改,thx ^ ^
文章:
Good afternoon everyone. Today, I would like to share with you about my feeling of the film 'L change the would'. This is a film that I have watched at last week.
'L change the world' is the film which talk about a ganius detective, L, and what he did in his last 23 days. This was a virus crisis at that time. The name of the virus called "Death" and it made by K, another genius.
At the end of the film, L was dead, but he saved and changed the world. He said that only one couldn't change the world. This ending is quite touching for me.
If I were the director and I have a chance to change the ending of the film, I would not let L dead. It is because L is a good person, and I will not let a good person dead, so I choose to change his world. also, if L had not died, I could watch more story about him.
Finally, I hope you feel more interested about this film and I would like to say with you 'Only one can't change the world.'
This is the end of my share,thank you for your attention.
作者:
匿名
時間: 2008-2-19 18:25
原帖由 小軒 於 2008-2-19 18:17 發表
今日你Ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔ果時Ｌ ｃｈａｎｇｅ ｔｈｅ ｗｏｒｌｄ 聽到嫌－ －
present首先要有個hook去吸引聽眾注意
作者:
小軒 時間: 2008-2-19 18:26
講咁多都晒氣= =
樓主今日已經考完=w=
作者:
小軒 時間: 2008-2-19 18:27
原帖由 Anonymous 於 2008-2-19 18:25 發表
present首先要有個hook去吸引聽眾注意
知唔知咩叫聽到嫌!?
作者:
匿名
時間: 2008-2-19 18:30
原帖由 小軒 於 2008-2-19 18:27 發表
知唔知咩叫聽到嫌!?
原帖由 小軒 於 2008-2-19 18:26 發表
講咁多都晒氣= =
樓主今日已經考完=w=
以上
作者:
匿名
時間: 2008-2-19 18:30
原帖由 小軒 於 2008-2-19 18:27 發表
知唔知咩叫聽到嫌!?
唔知
不過廢話又真係聽到厭
作者:
小軒 時間: 2008-2-19 18:34
原帖由 Anonymous 於 2008-2-19 18:30 發表
唔知
不過廢話又真係聽到厭
唔知仲可以咁多野講
作者:
星馬 時間: 2008-2-19 19:25
話說L在這場中
没有死去的說
1 day leave
[ 本帖最後由 星馬 於 2008-2-19 19:28 編輯 ]
作者:
匿名
時間: 2008-2-19 21:15
I believed that when you read this reply, you have already finished your presentation.
However, I hope my suggestion can help your next presentation.
Basically, in your speech you need to hook your audience.
You can tell a short story or your experience about the topic of your present
Also you can ask a question, your audience may not answer you, it’s only a part of your opening remarks.
Good afternoon everyone. Today, I would like to share with you about my feeling of the film 'L change the world’ that I have seen last week.
Anyone had ever seen this film?
It is about a genius detective, L, and what he did in his last 23 days in his life. In the story, he was facing a fatal virus called "Death" created by another genius, K.
At the end of the film, L was dead, but he saved and changed the world. He said that only one couldn't change the world(?). This ending is quite touching for me.
If I had a chance to change the ending of the film, I would have let L to survive. It is because L is a good person, and I will not let a good man to die, so I want to change his world. Also, if L was alive, I can learn more stories about him.
Finally, I hope this film will interest you and I would like to say with you 'Only one can't change the world.'(?)
This is the end of my share, thank you for your attention. Hope you like it.
作者:
homika﹏小貓 時間: 2008-2-19 21:31
原帖由 小軒 於 2008-2-19 18:26 發表
講咁多都晒氣= =
樓主今日已經考完=w=
最衰就係知佢要做oral 諗住幫佢搞到會順口d
點知俾人紅字提醒唔好改佢d野 想點??
作者:
小奈由季 時間: 2008-2-19 21:36
原帖由 homika﹏小貓 於 2008-2-19 21:31 發表
最衰就係知佢要做oral 諗住幫佢搞到會順口d
點知俾人紅字提醒唔好改佢d野 想點??
用自己常用的說法會比較好=~=.
十一點半抱佛腳就算啦-~-."
作者:
homika﹏小貓 時間: 2008-2-19 21:39
原帖由 小奈由季 於 2008-2-19 21:36 發表
用自己常用的說法會比較好=~=.
十一點半抱佛腳就算啦-~-."
琴晚都抱住幫到就幫既心態....
亦都見佢係小軒既同學我先幫佢一下
點知...再睇多次個post 當堂火都黎埋
作者:
小奈由季 時間: 2008-2-19 21:42
原帖由 homika﹏小貓 於 2008-2-19 21:39 發表
琴晚都抱住幫到就幫既心態....
亦都見佢係小軒既同學我先幫佢一下
點知...再睇多次個post 當堂火都黎埋
一句算啦(摸頭)
作者:
homika﹏小貓 時間: 2008-2-19 21:49
原帖由 小奈由季 於 2008-2-19 21:42 發表
一句算啦(摸頭)
所以...我以後都唔幫人呀 (淚奔)
作者:
小奈由季 時間: 2008-2-19 21:53
原帖由 homika﹏小貓 於 2008-2-19 21:49 發表
所以...我以後都唔幫人呀 (淚奔)
希望這句話是假的吧--."
作者:
homika﹏小貓 時間: 2008-2-19 22:05
原帖由 小奈由季 於 2008-2-19 21:53 發表
希望這句話是假的吧--."
唔好咁快掀穿我可以嘛....
作者:
小軒 時間: 2008-2-19 22:06
話說樓主用老師唔識既野,
搵老師笨實,
題目係英文電影,
呢個擺明係日文
[起哄]搵笨實!搵笨實!搵笨實![/搞事]
作者:
homika﹏小貓 時間: 2008-2-19 22:08
原帖由 小軒 於 2008-2-19 22:06 發表
話說樓主用老師唔識既野,
搵老師笨實,
題目係英文電影,
呢個擺明係日文
搵笨實!搵笨實!搵笨實!
baby 你返黎喇... orz
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